Pitching

What is the best way to pitch investors by email?

Short answer

I write investor emails for one defined type of investor, with a clear reason for reaching out. Start with a direct one-line description of what you are raising for and why this recipient may care. Make the fit specific to their known interests, experience, or investment focus. Keep the message brief enough to read quickly, and propose one simple next step, such as a short introductory call. Have accurate, consistent materials ready to share when requested.

Checklist

  • Define the investor type before writing, including relevant industry interests and investment experience.
  • Check that the person is a reasonable fit for the opportunity before contacting them.
  • Use a specific subject line that makes the topic clear without promising an outcome.
  • Open with a personal, accurate reason for contacting this recipient.
  • State your one-liner in plain language, including what the organization does and what capital it is seeking.
  • Explain the connection between the opportunity and the recipient's known interests.
  • Keep the first message focused on one opportunity and one request.
  • Ask for a clear next step, such as a brief introductory conversation.
  • Prepare a concise overview and pitch deck with consistent facts and figures before sending anything.
  • Track the date, message, response, and follow-up so communication stays organized and professional.

From my talks

"ESSENTIALLY, THE ADVICE HERE IS TO KNOW YOUR POSITION AND YOUR INVESTOR AVATAR AND THEN FIND A STRATEGY BY WHICH YOU FIND EXACT MATCHES FOR YOUR INVESTOR AVATAR LEADS OR CAN CREATE A DATABASE OF PROSPECTS THAT LIKELY WOULD BE LEADS FOR YOU."

Capital Raising Book

Common scenario

A founder identifies an investor who has experience in the same industry and writes a short note explaining that connection. The email says what the company does, what it is raising for, and why the recipient's background appears relevant. It asks for a brief introductory call, rather than trying to explain every detail of the opportunity in the first message. The founder has a concise overview ready if the investor asks to see more.

What to do next

  1. Write a one-sentence description of the organization, the opportunity, and the capital being sought. Check that it is accurate and understandable to someone outside your team.
  2. Choose one investor profile and list the interests, experience, and relevant contacts that would make a prospect a plausible fit. Use those criteria to review each recipient before writing.
  3. Draft an email with a specific subject, a personal reason for contacting the recipient, the one-liner, the fit, and one clear request. Remove background details that are not needed to understand those points.
  4. Review every factual claim against your approved materials. Make sure the overview and deck match the email.
  5. Record the contact and schedule a respectful follow-up. If there is no response, follow up with a useful, concise note and keep a record of the outcome.

Work through it with the investor meeting prep and follow-up checklist. See all pitching questions.

Watch 3 videos

Live Investor Ratings - Hear Investor's First Impressions on a Brand Name and/or 10-Second Pitch

Live Investor Ratings - Hear Investor's First Impressions on a Brand Name and/or 10-Second Pitch

Richard C. Wilson and the Family Office Club hear investors' first impressions of a brand name or short pitch. The session discusses what makes an investment proposition compelling and how clarity and impact can shape investor decisions.

Investor First Impressions: Live Brand & One-Liner Ratings by Active Investors

Investor First Impressions: Live Brand & One-Liner Ratings by Active Investors

Active investors review attendee-submitted brands and one-liners and give feedback on clarity, impact, and uniqueness.

One-Liner Hot Seat Webinar - Live Feedback on Pitches

One-Liner Hot Seat Webinar - Live Feedback on Pitches

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Richard C. Wilson

About Richard C. Wilson

Richard C. Wilson has run the Family Office Club since 2007. It is the largest investor club in the world by media reach. The 15-person team hosts 30 events a year, including 16 in person, and has hosted more than 340 events since 2007. Richard shares what he has learned on the Centimillionaire Strategies YouTube channel.

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